crash

3ww prompt: disarray, rabble, validate

by marisol diaz

Each thought is gridlocked on the blood infused highway of my nerves and arteries.

When the traffic begins to flow it does so in disarray - each thought crashing onto each other - breaking windshields, folding metal and permanently denting my heart.

The rabble of emotions you inspire makes the andrenaline rip the roof off the car and pull the victim out.

You walk away aimlessly and carefree of me.

Hit and Run.

If only you could stop, look at me, validate my licence and tell me I should be on this road and that crashes like this one are the result of mutual admiration.

Comments

[floreta]

wow, this is a great metaphor. i enjoyed this immensely. i love everything about this esp: When the traffic begins to flow it does so in disarray - each thought crashing onto each other - breaking windshields, folding metal and permanently denting my heart.

[ThomG]

I, too, dig the metaphor of love being like a car accident. We seem to crash into one another, then drive off when the damage is done.

[Daily Panic]

love does make an impact. Well written.

[Anthony North]

Great metaphor, and the words are powerful and stunning. And all set off by a marvellous picture.

[Sepiru Chris]

What a lovely piece of writing. I am totally captured by your metaphor and word choices. Images collide, crumple, and birth new images. My cheeks are hurting they are smiling so much.

[gautami]

Good one. I have missed your writings..

3WW: mysticism

[Zouxzoux]

Aaahhhh...very intuitive. Great work.

[one more believer]

that is dynamite!!!... the road, crashing and highway w/o a license... awesome!!! and the end result mutual validation....

[Seph]

Hit and Run. amazing metaphor, I've been away from your blog for far too long, <3
I also do not see Emery's comment so i believe i have won this round. :)