visual artist and writer marisol diaz i am a self-defined Nuyorican creative (that is a Puerto Rican who is from both the isles of Manhattan, NYC and the Caribbean). I share in the joy of education while now living in Oak Ridge, NJ with my two dogs and artist husband. Check out my Etsy shop for purchasable pieces. Please do not reproduce imagery off of this site without explicit permission.
Wednesday, March 4, 2009 at 03:50PM 3ww prompt: Avenge, Genuine, Ramble
Did you know if I painted your portrait it would look like this?
Beautiful and closed, especially to me.
door by marisol diazIn front of you I ramble, on and on and on.
Behind you I am genuine.
Inside you I would tread lightly to avenge my heart.
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Reader Comments (9)
This is just a fine piece of writing. So simple, yet so powerful.
Great photo and very evocative wriing
This has a very gentle feel to it.
If and it is, addressed to Mr Door then I get this amazing image of you walking around inside the door, of course when you said inside you, you might have been refering to the house - even so, this still has a very gentle feel to it!
like someone who is desperate to be heard, I think the door is like a invisible wall that hides one's own desires but when it is open, it can bring out that longings that springs from within, or something like that
Oh, I've been there...Couldn't have written it as well, however!
I could feel the sadness. Love that you added a pic!
This was so heartfelt...and I love the photo of the door. Beautiful!
wonderful. you make it seem so easy. :) bravo!
Amarettogirl,
Very smooth verse.
Insightful, delightful,
succint without seeming too terse.
Tschuess,
Chris